James P. Holoka
The Peloponnesian War. New York: Viking, 2003. Pp.
xxvii, 511. ISBN 0670032115.
Donald Kagan is the dean of American ancient historians.
As a professor at Yale for many years
and the lead author of a textbook, The Western Heritage, now in its
eighth edition, he knows how to explain the complexities of Greek and
Roman history in a palatable manner to an undergraduate audience—probably
the entry-level readership for the book under review. Not surprisingly,
then, this 500-page book, an epitome of his earlier four-volume magnum
opus on the Peloponnesian War,
features clear, workmanlike prose undisfigured by footnotes
and parceled in small units easily surveyed in a nine-page table of
contents. Seven parts comprise thirty-seven chapters, with an average of
five subsections per chapter. A helpful array of twenty-nine maps is a
One may imagine three categories of readers for this book:
(A) those with no familiarity with Thucydides; (B) those with a passing
acquaintance dating, say, to a college-level Great Books course; and (C)
those with a more intimate knowledge, such as graduate students and
professional historians. I will specify the value of Kagan’s book for
members of each group.
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(A) Readers in the first category will get from Kagan’s
history both more and less than they might by reading Thucydides himself:
to start with, an account of the entire war. Thucydides’ narrative breaks
off after autumn 411, likely because death supervened (ca. 397) before he
could complete his history. Events of the last six and a half years of the
war must be cobbled together, as Kagan skillfully does, from the works of
later, lesser writers, principally Xenophon’s Hellenica and
Plutarch’s Lives. Thucydides’ and Xenophon’s account of the war—in
virtually all its details—is enriched by Kagan’s thorough knowledge of
other relevant ancient sources and his exhaustive command of modern
scholarship. By no mean feat of compression and synthesis, Kagan steers
safely between the Scylla of overwhelming detail
and the Charybdis of oversimplification.
Kagan provides a comprehensive, nuanced history of the
Peloponnesian War that corrects Thucydides’ biases against Cleon and
others, blind spots, e.g., regarding economic factors, and distortions,
especially in reporting speeches. Though all this is to the good, the
reader will miss the unique character of the ancient historian’s account,
with its distinctive prejudices, anti-Herodotean aspirations to strict
rationality, and thrilling portrayals of major figures through such
tour-de-force renditions as Pericles’ Epitaphios, the debate over
Mytilene, or the “Melian Dialogue.” The bottom line: those desiring to
experience “Thucydides” as a giant in the western historiographical
tradition must, naturally, read him in his own words (or translated
words). But those who seek simply an accessible, reliable, and thorough
description of the Peloponnesian War based on a lifetime of research will
be well served by Kagan’s book.
(B) Readers who have encountered Thucydides directly
or in textbook chapters based on him will remember certain elements of a
“common knowledge” tradition: the sharp distinction between short-fuse
precipitants (the Athenian alliance with Corcyra, the revolt of Potidaea,
the Megarian decree) and the longer-fuse “true cause”—growing Spartan fear
of growing Athenian power since the end of the Persian Wars; the faith
that Pericles’ contemplated war of attrition could have brought ultimate
victory and that later leaders, like Cleon and Alcibiades, were to blame
for ruinous decisions that he would have avoided—to reject the Spartan
peace offer after the battle of Pylos/Sphacteria in 425 and to mount the
ill-fated Sicilian expedition in 415.
Kagan problematizes much of this historical fable
convenue by stressing the financial limitations on any protracted war
and the difficulty of holding the Athenian populace to an unprecedented
strategy of defensive warfare. In addition, he amplifies two important
motifs in the ancient sources: the shifting and decisive role of the Persians in the
latter stages of the war, and the trumping of city-state patriotism
throughout the war by allegiance to oligarchic or democratic political
factions. He also clarifies the logic of decisions often facilely
dismissed as foolhardy, showing that there were sensible justifications
even for the expedition against Syracuse, as it was initially conceived:
The growth of Syracusan power since 424, however, may well have increased
their [sic] scope of Athenian goals. Unchecked, Syracuse might gain
control of much of Sicily and tip the balance in the Greek world in favor
of the Peloponnesians. Many or most of the Athenians … might have believed
that settling affairs in the Athenian interest demanded the defeat or even
the conquest of Syracuse. A surprise attack directly on the city from the
sea might succeed with only sixty ships, as might an attempt to recruit
Sicilian allies who could overawe or defeat the Syracusans. In either
case, the risk to Athens would be low (255–56).
One cannot in a brief review convey the scope and cogency
of Kagan’s analyses of the Thucydidean presentation of the war and the
decision-making of the parties to it. His re-evaluation does not only, or
even mainly, debunk our principal ancient source: it improves our
understanding of the war through judicious supplementation and refinement
of that source. Kagan’s guiding principle may be seen in this telling
remark in a discussion of the oligarchic revolution of 411: “If Thucydides
is mistaken or misinformed about motives in this instance, he may be
equally wrong in other cases, so we must not simply accept his opinions
without question but examine each case on its own merits” (365).
(C) Serious students of Thucydides or the military history
of ancient Greece generally will discover little new here; rather they
will value Kagan’s book as a handy précis of his four-volume masterwork,
to which they may return for details of the scholarly argumentation and
the perceptive engagement with modern historians that underlies all his
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Donald Kagan has distilled his enviable erudition in a
dependable and approachable history of the Peloponnesian War. That his
book has attracted attention even in the popular press is most
encouraging, for the war’s lessons speak to many later conflicts, as
Thucydides presciently claimed they would (1.22). Consider Kagan on the
Athenians’ fatally misguided prolongation of the Sicilian expedition:
Their error, in fact, is one common to powerful states,
regardless of their constitutions, when they are unexpectedly thwarted by
an opponent they anticipated would be weak and easily defeated. Such
states are likely to view retreat as a blow to their prestige, and while
unwelcome in itself, it is also an option that puts into question their
strength and determination and with it their security. Support for
ventures such as the Sicilian campaign generally remains strong until the
prospect of victory disappears (296).
Who cannot perceive the relevance of this to our own world?
Eastern Michigan University
Among other honors, he was chosen to deliver the National Endowment
for the Humanities Jefferson Lecture for 2005: “In Defense of History”
On his brilliance as a teacher, see Barry Strauss’s appreciation, “The
Scholar and Teacher” <link>.
The Outbreak of the Peloponnesian War, The Archidamian War,
The Peace of Nicias and the Sicilian Expedition, and The
Fall of the Athenian Empire (Ithaca: Cornell U Pr,
There are, however, frequent parenthetical citations of passages in
Thucydides and a few other ancient authors. An appendix on “Sources
for the History of the Peloponnesian War” offers a succinct review of
the ancient sources and landmarks in nineteenth- and twentieth-century
These are mostly newly drawn and represent an improvement over those
in the four-volume version (where vol. 1 has none at all). Note these
corrigenda: on Map 4, for “Oenos” read “Oenoe”; on Map 25, for
“Chios” (just SE of Attica) read “Ceos” and for “Carysus” read
“Carystus”; on Map 28, strike the reference to “note 59” and note that
the compass symbol is erroneous (north being in fact west) and that
the indication of Pericles’ position at the battle is correct (i.e.
reflects Xenophon), despite the text on p. 456. Among a half dozen or
so errors in the text, only one could lead to confusion: on p. 151,
line 8, for “as the Athenians had been” read “as the Ambracians had
Thucydides certainly can overwhelm, assuming as he does an audience
fascinated with the myriad details of his subject. Further, on the
level of word-choice and syntax, he writes a singularly dense and
intricate prose. The degree of difficulty in reading his history may
be gauged from the scale of modern commentaries devoted to it: e.g.,
E.F. Poppo and I.F. Stahl, edd., Thucydidis de Bello Peloponnesiaco
libri octo, 4 vols. (Leipzig: Teubner, 1875–1889), A.W. Gomme, A.
Andrewes, and K.J. Dover, edd., A Historical Commentary on
Thucydides, 5 vols. (Oxford: Clarendon Pr, 1945–1981), and S.
Hornblower, ed., A Commentary on Thucydides, 2 vols. [of a
projected three] (Oxford: OUP, 1997/2005).
In my view, Kagan sometimes tacks a bit close to Scylla, e.g., in
retailing the intentions and machinations of participants in the
Argive alliance after the signing of the Peace of Nicias or the
oligarchic reaction of 411-410. But these are quibbles.
Thanks chiefly to B.D. Meritt, H.T. Wade-Gery, and M.F. McGregor,
The Athenian Tribute Lists, vol. 1 (Cambridge: Harvard U Pr,
1939), vols. 2-4 (Princeton, NJ: American School of Classical Studies
at Athens, 1949/1950/1953).
Similarly, though the source in this case is Xenophon, Kagan explains
the urgent “on-site” tactical and strategic considerations behind the
decisions of the eight strategoi who failed to retrieve
survivors and corpses from the sea after the battle of the Arginusae
Islands in 406 (459–61).